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2019-06-26
更新時(shí)間:2022-10-11 18:00:39作者:佚名
準(zhǔn)備在7月份考雅思的同學(xué),可以看看這個(gè)月的雅思作文,并且進(jìn)行練習(xí),把握一些考試的難度,那么下面就和出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)的小編來(lái)看看2019年7月18日雅思寫作機(jī)經(jīng)。
雅思小作文范文解析:
地圖描述的是十年之間一個(gè)博物館的布局的變化,首先要注意的這個(gè)圖中應(yīng)該統(tǒng)一使用過(guò)去式,同時(shí)在描述的時(shí)候可以簡(jiǎn)單的分為三個(gè)部分進(jìn)行描述:左側(cè),中部和右側(cè)。按照5段的結(jié)構(gòu)進(jìn)行描述比較不會(huì)混亂,同時(shí)要著重的突出變化的描述,使用相關(guān)的銜接詞匯進(jìn)行前后的對(duì)比。
雅思小作文高分表達(dá)
renovation of a museum addition of extra facilities
gave way to is arranged as
newly established transformed to
fully take advantage of serving different purposes
left wing relocated
雅思小作文范文
The pair of maps reveals the changes in the renovation of a museum in terms of room distributions and addition of extra facilities during a 10-year period (1998-2008).
In 1998, on the left wing of the museum, permanent and temporary rooms occupied this area. Tem year later, the temporary rooms is relocated backward which gave way to the construction of a coat room and a shop, used to be on the left front side of museum. In addition, a part of the permanent rooms is arranged as a restaurant.
In the middle part, there was an exit, a garden and a café in order. However, some fountains were newly established in the garden and also the area of the café shrank and a washroom was built.
Turning to the right side of the museum, a shop, washroom and coat room was in the front, while In 2008, they were all transformed to be permanent rooms.
Overall, the space of this museum is more fully take advantage of than before with more amenities, better serving different purposes.(范文原創(chuàng)自小站老師Jeff. Lei)字?jǐn)?shù) 176 words
雅思寫作大作文真題:Many people prefer to communicate with their online friends than to socialize with people in their local communities. Do you think it has more advantages than disadvantages?
雅思寫作大作文解析:本題討論人們更喜歡網(wǎng)交流而不是面對(duì)面交流的益處是否大于弊端。題目類型是議論文的一種觀點(diǎn)類題目,題目問(wèn)問(wèn)法是Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages類型,可以采用5段式作文結(jié)構(gòu)。
雅思文章結(jié)構(gòu)
P1:引入話題+表明觀點(diǎn)(否定觀點(diǎn))
P2:指出此做法的的優(yōu)勢(shì):可以一定程度上幫助人們釋放壓力;
P3:指出此做法的弊端:對(duì)人們的心理健康有害;
P4:指出此做法的弊端:降低工作和學(xué)習(xí)效率。
P5:總結(jié):概括文章內(nèi)容和重申觀點(diǎn)。
雅思寫作高分表達(dá)
Indulge in 沉溺于
Daily routine 日常生活
Under intense pressure 壓力很大
In this case 在這種情況下
Vulnerable 脆弱的
real-world problems 現(xiàn)實(shí)世界問(wèn)題
Take a heavy toll on 對(duì)...有負(fù)面影響
Distraction 分心的事物
Put simply 簡(jiǎn)單來(lái)說(shuō)
Be addicted to 沉溺于
雅思寫作高分結(jié)構(gòu)
No matter how 讓步狀語(yǔ)從句
It is a fact that .... and that... 同位語(yǔ)從句
... 平行結(jié)構(gòu)
Release and reduce 押頭韻
......, an unhealthy lifestyle that 概括性同位語(yǔ)
Never will this be 部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)表達(dá)強(qiáng)調(diào)
雅思寫作范文
Indulging in the social networks to chat with online friends,compared with face-to-face communication, seems to become a daily routine for almost all people, no matter how old they are. But this preference is more detrimental to people involved.
Communicating with online friends appears to be a much easier and more acceptable way to relieve stress. It is fact that people, including working adults and students, are under intense pressure from work, study, and emotional life, and that they are reluctant or unwilling to share their life with friends and neighbours in the real-world for different reasons. In this case, the sharing of a tough point or some bad experiences, such as conflicts between colleagues , the complaints of the work, or peer pressure is a seemingly strange yet safer way to release and reduce the pressure that can hardly be shared with best friends and people in their local community.
However, staying in touch with online friends will make people more emotionally vulnerable than traditional communication do. All people indeed do not live in a virtual world but are surrounded with people like family members, colleagues and neighbour in this physical world. If always chatting with a stranger online, they will spend less time with those real people who are important for them and who will help them when they are helpless with read-world problems, an unhealthy lifestyle that is more likely to result in such emotional illness as isolation , depression, and even autism.
This preference also takes a heavy toll on employees’ productivity and students’ academic performance. Using the Internet to work and study is as normal as having a breakfast these days. Under this circumstance, either workers or students while working or studying are easily to stay active on social networks rather on focus on their job or study,and it is a dangerous distraction to decrease work and study efficiency. Put simply, this habit that people are addicted to online conversation, instead of talking with real people ,is more time-wasting than productive and efficient.
In conclusion, feasible as it is in the stress reduction, giving preference to virtual communication rather than socialising with real people in the real world does harm to the emotional health of people and the improvement of work or study efficiency and never will this be beneficial to people in the long term.(字?jǐn)?shù) 336words)